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A Lock takes a Walk

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rated 1.84 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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lock
walk
brian

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Uploaded
Mar 31, 2009 | 6:29 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This is made for Mrs Gerhan's class.
just pass it.

Reviews


ledi51ledi51

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Well...

The lock idea just isn't.. amazing. What you COULD do is like make some other characters that can talk (get to that later) and they could make some kind of lock-oriented jokes at him... but you'd have to be a funny guy to think of funny jokes having to do with LOCKS.

Second, you need voices. Or at least download a more realistic voice simulator than what you have. There are free ones out there.

Last, draw more detailed backgrounds. Your backgrounds were black and white. And consisted of a single line.



HellboundProphetHellboundProphet

Rated 2 / 5 stars

I was gonna blam this thing

But then I heard....Why is Micheal Jackson there?


superuber responds:

i know, it is good.
pm me suggestions for numbuh 2