Score: 7
"interesting story"
date: March 29, 2009
i really like the storyline you have here! definitely a plus. i also loved the main voice 3 voice actors (the guy with the beard, the creepy bald man, and the red-haired woman). i felt like there were some missing sound effects (such as when the aircrafts were landing and when people were running around and the fire cackling). and some sound effects seemed a bit hollow, like there should have been more there (such as the explosions).
for the most part, i really like the storyline you had. the animating i can tell you have a lot of potential at and i really don't have too many complaints about that except your women seemed a bit weirdly drawn- all tits and waist and ass. xD and they all kind of dressed... distastefully. i think if you toned them down just a little bit, it would be a lot more realistic.
anyway, thank you so much for including me in this! i really do like the storyline and can't wait for the rest of it =D