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Mar 25, 2009 | 7:12 PM EDT

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Made this in pivot and through much hassle ( 5 hours of trial and error and rendering) then took it up to screen record and importing......

Based off a fight between me and my friends and multiple other people featured in there...They know who they are

First pivot I ever made and first flash submission...lets see how it goes...

I understand this is a little odd and not well animated, but depending on reviews I may re-submit with more optimized audio as well as effects (maybe even sound effects!!!) Note that the fighting area was originally a lot smaller so in the beginning it starts in the top left corner.

~enjoy and review

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DudewheresmypornDudewheresmyporn

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Dude, that was awesome

PENISES


Ice-cold-wolf responds:

AWE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


alecdean1994alecdean1994

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

ok not the best

you need to practice with stick pivot before making another one


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Ice-cold-wolf responds:

I know, it was my first, and i have gotten better, its just this was the only one i put on Newgrounds. If anything, this will make my others look good.


DasimonsterDasimonster

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad...

It was pretty good for your first one, keep working at it! The concept and style was great!


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Ice-cold-wolf responds:

Thanks, I hope my others will be allot better though.


SkyBlueCivicSkyBlueCivic

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad for a beginner...

I could tell that you're just a beginner so I'm giving you a 6 for this. Primarily for the music, because it seems unique to what I usually hear on NG, and the effort because you said it was your first flash. I'm learning flash myself, and I also have a hard time trying to animate sometimes.

But what you can improve on is frame rate, and improving the animation because it was extremely jerky. Even though stick fighting is what some might say overused, or not cool, all you can do is just try to add something original to it, and add like a really good plot. Learning flash animating is also a major plus, and it's needed.

Overall, I found it okay, but I can see that there's a lot of potential that you have. I hope my review helps and it wasn't going to make you think TL;DR.


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Ice-cold-wolf responds:

There is a story line behind this but its hard to catch because it bases around our lives...so if you don't know us you don't pick up all the references...mainly we put this up to get some feedback for improvment. The framerate will be better next time...with the hassle we had getting it into flash It got recorded at 200 fps then compressed to 40 fps then further compressed to 30 and finally to 10....so it got a little messed up...next time we hope to animate fully in flash


tehblabtehblab

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Good for a first try

Its okay for your first try, but i'm pretty sure pivot can convert files to .gifs, using that would have made it much better. I tried pivot before, and all i ever made was choppy, robot-like animations so good job i guess. Although not the best you could do for a first try, it's definitely not the worst


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Ice-cold-wolf responds:

We tryed using seven different computers and for whatever reason we kept running out of memory when saving it...the bitmaps ended up at 5 gb total...so this was the only way I could get it to work right...We have been trying to get this on here for a couple years now but now it is. lol. Even using pivot we have some very smooth animations that we are touching up with flash. should be up soon