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Rate and review please. I really need improvements. This is my first movie.
not bad but work on the jason the killer
make him more frightning and make a guy he is after and put some like throwing knives in him anywhere and give him more guns and swords he can use
Need some Help?
You need some Help ????
Stop the tweening its making flash look crappy and stupid even if I can't make a madness animation this is crap compared to others because your always bragging about your tweening, Im not flaming you or anything but please stop and you have talent but dont brag about it all the time
go make one better if u can noob :p
not bad for your first
Dude you can make this good if you put some work into it.
First flash, eh?
This is okay for a first flash; HOWEVER, it does need many improvements to be anything worth watching. As a few before me have said:
Oh god, the tweening! Get rid of it completely.
The length was actually okay for a four hour flash, but it needs a hell of a lot more then what you have at the moment to be considered good.
Music. Either find something that suits or use none at all. This could determine a lot about your flash; and if people like it or not.
Give a plot, will you? Madness doesn't require much of one; It's just a bit of random, though epic, violence. A plot allows the viewer to really get into the flash.
Your character also needs some background. Why is he killing everyone in that building? Why is he wearing those bandages and that mask? Too many questions left unanswered can really effect your ratings.
Keep on trying and eventually you'll have something good. Until then, I wish you good luck.
I have a plot dude. I already have one. And one more thing, don't you know jason? And also this is just a preview that's why there's no background.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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