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OK, this is what this is:
I had to give a persuasive speech for school and this was going to be my visual. However, it ended up being too long and I didn't just want to delete it, so I uploaded it.
Based on a true story. The difference: Oysters don't talk.
The animation was solid, and the music was alright. The building drawing however, was pretty bad. Personally, it looked like a building block.
The plot was utterly random and insignificant. I honestly had no idea what was happening, or the significance of the ending. Although I'm pretty sure it was supposed to be funny, I don't really see the humor in what happened. The montage line was funny, admittedly.
The voice acting was rather out of sync at times, and a the montage line was left unfinished. I'm unaware of why the bones were neccesary,
Even the moral was bad, in that it seemed to advocate psudoscience and dismissing proper rock dating. Rock dating can be misused, however in most cases it has proven to be authentic, such as in the case of the dead sea scrolls. Multiple samples from the same object have been taken, yielding consistent results, something you wouldn't expect of radiocarbon dating was unrealible.
(I would rebut your actual example, but I'm taking up enough time critiquing the issue as it is. If you really wish to debate me, just drop me a line.)
this thing froze when he was talking about montages
Although some animations were choppy, voices were alittle slow and off synch
and the plot was alittle hard to follow it had randomness, need to work on some of it if you want it to pass ( not saying it wont or will ) but if it does congrats :D
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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