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This is a piece I did to the very Talented Heather Dale's "Mordred's Lullaby" The song is absolutely gorgeous and I wanted to do something with it. (Mediocre though my skill-set is at present)
Well it was good, the song was good and so was the animation but that was it... it was... good. Thanks for your submission, I enjoyed it!
Um, is it good that the animation + the song + the ending almost brought a tear to my eye?
Awesome work. I like how the whole animation is sort of like turning pages in a story book. I don't know if that's what you intended, but either way, it's brilliant.
Also, excellent work on getting the words of the song to match each situation depicted.
I love your work, and I hope to see more of it.
10 Gold Stars.
Animation may be smoother
Overall: Very good
Animation: decent; bonus for lip-syncing. Could have been smoother, though.
Style: excellent. The choice of blues and grays gave a special ambience, and the ghosts added a lot to the overall feel of the song.
Story: well done. There was the impression of a rising champion throughout, and a feeling of harsh injustice at the end.
Song: good choice. I'll have to look up more by Heather Dale; I'm a sucker for Gaelic music. :)
Overall: 5/5 and 9/10, and a new addition to my favorites collection.
u could've given a better an clearer story but not bad
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