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This is a trailer/introduction.
Created with LS Maker, video camera, and flash.
This took a long time and a lot of effort. Hell this was made when there was still snow on the ground as you can see in the flash itself. It's just being done now.
This is episode 1 of 3. The reason it's split up into three episodes is because the file would be way too big if we would try to fit it all into one.
Please enjoy and review. Leave your youtube comments to yourself and remember that every type of movie is welcome on newgrounds. Not just flash. Remember Numa Numa right?
Sorry for the bad quality in video and also audio, but it's the only way to get such a big file to fit without being like 50 MB's.
Watch the high quality version here. (minus the space)
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=wt3RJZGhys4&feature =channel_page
Like always, thanks to http://miharuforever.newg rounds.com/ for doing the flash related things. He will be coed on the submission if he wants to be. I'll talk to him about it.
It would probably help if you watched Hay Wars first just so you knew what was going on and everything even though there isn't too much of a story yet. :)
Original, funny, but...
I just hate seeing video submisions on NG. It makes it even worse that you seemed to have done the tiniest amout posssible, a marginally small amount of this, in flash. So -2 right off the bat. The video was very funny however. The humor was a little corny, but the good kind of corny, the kind that makes you laugh. This was also very original, very Star Wars-esque, with a kinda proud Call of Duty feel to it. You managed to ceep your own vibe to it, which made it that much better. I was pissed to see that there was no fight scene, but I understand you have to break it up due to the video embeds. Well, an overall nice job. I hope to see Snow Wars 2 out soon.
Thanks a lot for your review. Thanks for still giving it an honest review even though you don't live video submissions on newgrounds.
Perhaps I will attempt to put more flash into my future submissions that include video even if it's just more of an intro or credits or something like that.
Anyway, great review thank you very much.
Not quite there
This isn't the best movie I've ever seen, but then again, it's by no accounts the worst one either. I think that the visual effects that you used over the metal track were poor, to say the least, especially as the movie screed didn't fit in the line "Comes the highly anticipated..." It sets a bad tone for the whole piece.
When it comes to the video, the music was too loud for the voices in places, which really let it down. Personally, I wouldn't waste so much time with producing a lengthy introductory video, that keeps going to a black screen for "directed by", "starring" and all that other stuff. You can get that out of the way in a few minutes. This looks more like a trailer, rather than the first episode. It doesn't really offer much of an introduction - if you were trying to make it look like a movie trailer, get a final frame piece, with a big promotional shot, some great graphics and some things like the traditional billboard print for who's in it and everything.
Still, something to work on, is always good.
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Yeah in the author comments I mention that it is just a trailer for the movie, but I agree with you this really didn't turn out well. Not in flash at least. Try and watch the youtube version, which is also posted in my author comments and you will notice that the audio and video problems are fixed and it runs much more smoothly.
You can also think of it as an introduction when the other 2 episodes are played right in a row and it runs together quite smoothly. We've decided not to finish this now and you'll just be getting some sprite flashes from me and that's probably about it for the movies that I submit to newgrounds. I'll try to get 5 sprites or so more and then I'll be done.
Thanks for the review.
got kinda blurry/bright at times, but also pretty funny and well made
also like the background music
Yeah, the video quality was poor making it too bright at times.
I'm happy that you liked the humor, and the music was really good. I give props to PlsurUCantMeshur for finding it.
it pretty good but i think it could of been a little better just try a little harder next time
Will do sir.
Even though this was hard work.
Nice, the humor is brilliant, the voice acting is good and the storyline is hilarious
It seemed likt it was more of a trailer than a whole flash, but I guess thats because it had to be split in 3 (yeah some people read the comments at top) only real problem I had is that it was kinda boring in between the jokes
I'd watch more
Yeah, you are right it is the trailer/introduction to the submission. I will add that to the author comments now.
Thanks for the review. :)
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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