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Keep your city clean.
Here's my unnecessarily tough review:
Art: beginner-level, but not bad.
Animation: minimal, but not to the point of boredom.
Sound: there was at least music.
Storyline: it was okay. For the future, storyboards make longer plots easier to manage.
Overall, okay for a beginner. I think you'll improve as you move forward and gain experience. Keep working on it!
Thank you so much for your valuable time to critic this movie and give me some useful pointers. God bless you kind sir :-)
It's nice, but why is the rating so low? Should...
Nice, and you must show it as a commercial, but frankly, I don't know why, or who made this submission get 1.66 or 1.72 ~ you get the picture. Should desrve to get around 2.67/5.00 . Anyway, i did my best and gave it a 5/5.
Thank you Sanjeev. Whatever score I get I am very happy. It is what I have deserved to get. By the way are you from India my friend? I am from India myself and it is good to meet one of my own countrymen here :-)
yay, u must show it on TV!1
Wow! You really think so? Ha ha ha.. I think I need to improve a bit more but thanks a lot anyway. VERY encouraging for beginner like me :-)
It sends a good message and really think of the envroment
Thank you so much. You are very kind :-)
its a nice little flash but its kinda boring though.
Thanks for your review!
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