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That was absolutely brilliant. Keep the videos coming. Emma would be proud.
The animations weren't that good and the story line kinda sucked.
just a few things. one is the audio. the music changes levels (yes I read your description), and 2, the gunshots are a really annoying sound, you might want to bring down their volume a little. Second is your subtitles. Sometimes you can read them because the background they are on is white too. You could increase the size of the project and just make a black bar on the bottom for the subtitles, or you could change the color so that it is a little more contrasting to the background. Overall, pretty well done, and a decent story too.
Thanks for the tips, I will put that in my next animation.
I enjoyed that allot, The town getting nuked ended was abit unnessassary.
Positives:Good animation went well with music. Lots of colour used, Funny and nice storyline.
Negatives: Not really any that I can think of.
Overall: Very good, I hope to see more from you soon :D.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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