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Mar 18, 2009 | 3:49 AM EDT

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Well i promised a longer animation and i think this one is not short.I added sound effects and everything.Frame rate 24 and the frames are 1238.I'll try the next time to make it even longer :-) . BTW i really like to thank the creator of a pizza game i used the music from there as a sound effect and i hope that's not stealing cause i don't know ..... Well kay .Thanks for watching.Rate and Comment :-) .



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 18, 2009

What was that?

I think the problem with this animation is clear: that it, itself, is not clear. I can tell there was a story that you were trying to tell, but I didn't understand what it was. Part of that was due to the graphics; they're awful. The people barely look like people, there's no background, and barely any props. The other problem is the voice acting. There's potential there, but not enough of that was shown here for me to believe it wasn't the same person doing all the character's voices. Even if there was, some of the things they were saying didn't come through clearly, so that also added to the problem. My advice to you is simple: amp up the quality of EVERYTHING for your next submission.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 18, 2009

Not good voice acting

But i worked in a pizza place for 3 years and some customers were like that ...bitching cus their pizza wasnt out in 10 minutes. I think a 5 and 3 was pretty generous.

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