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Mar 18, 2009 | 3:49 AM EDT

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Well i promised a longer animation and i think this one is not short.I added sound effects and everything.Frame rate 24 and the frames are 1238.I'll try the next time to make it even longer :-) . BTW i really like to thank the creator of a pizza game i used the music from there as a sound effect and i hope that's not stealing cause i don't know ..... Well kay .Thanks for watching.Rate and Comment :-) .

Reviews


aznpandaaznpanda

Rated 4 / 5 stars

weird background

weird audio

funny little animation though, good!



FlexxusFlexxus

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Voice acting and Animation

Well, you have managed to animate pretty good but It's hard to tell what the animations have to do with the story line. Also it's hard to tell the different characters apart from each other because they all sound the same, you could at least try to sound like different persons. The sound effects are nice, but what you could add is some background, plain white gets boring. But otherwise pretty nice, I bet you have potential of doing a much better flash movie.



NeoWhoopNeoWhoop

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Zany

Wacky, off the wall, call it whatever, but I could recall a very early Matt Wilson movie which had the same plotless animation constructed simply to show his skills as an aspiring Flash artist. Keep up the work, make a storyline beyond simply eating, tune the audio up, and you'll be on your way.



OmegaDeadOmegaDead

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Meh

I could've been better. You should ask somebody to help you with your voices, because yours, no offense, was kind of iritating. As well the animation could use some improvements.



WhatTheFnuWhatTheFnu

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

What was that?

I think the problem with this animation is clear: that it, itself, is not clear. I can tell there was a story that you were trying to tell, but I didn't understand what it was. Part of that was due to the graphics; they're awful. The people barely look like people, there's no background, and barely any props. The other problem is the voice acting. There's potential there, but not enough of that was shown here for me to believe it wasn't the same person doing all the character's voices. Even if there was, some of the things they were saying didn't come through clearly, so that also added to the problem. My advice to you is simple: amp up the quality of EVERYTHING for your next submission.