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Humanz in their normal daily life...
Part 1 of a series of simple shorts, intended to be fun and entertaining.
A great non-violent alternative to the massacre we usually see here on NG, lol
Enjoy the Humanz!! ;-)
(more episodes coming soon)
Thx for watching! ^ ^
Meh i liked it
it was Like T&P off southpark lol
But ...yeah needs plot
i'll vote 5
but only cause i know you tried.
better luck next time
Thank you very much :)
I didn't really try to achieve something with this.
Succes (which i need the luck for you mentioned, i guess) is not what i strive for. :)
good god, are you kidding me?
The first thing I noticed was that you basically just shat out some scribbles. That's not drawing. That was three rectangles with flashing dots for eyes. You did animate their faces but it looked like you could have really done a lot more with a little more time and effort, okay? So why didn't you put it in here? At least you used tolerable colors instead of green, cyan, yellow, and black.
You did not use dialogue. Instead you used sound effects, almost all of them from an audience we can assume the characters are performing for. So.... the guy farts, and the audience laughsandlaughsandlaughsandlaughs for ten fucking minutes until we wonder if they will ever stop. And then he does it again, and they do it again. And then it's over. That's not a joke, guy. We're supposed to laugh, not the imaginary audience. Listening to layers and layers of laughing people doesn't make me laugh. The fart joke alone- without the laughing- was on par with Terrance and Philip, who are a satire. You have to have more. More content. You can fit a solid joke in the length of time I waited for the imaginary audience to put their heads back on and wipe the tears out of their eyes, but this wasn't it.
Come on, Humanz? with a z? That's so cheesy. And it's also ironic, because they weren't human at all. They were a gag, like Terrance and Philip.
It really looks like you can do more. Though you had an unusual overuse of sound effects, it means that you can use sound effects well- like in your intro. The music matched well. And as for your characters, their facial movements throughout is another crucial concept that you, as an animator, understand completely.
So do more. I just wanted it to end.
That was like a sound board thew up on a Terence and Philip cartoon....
Plot . .
I appreciate the boycott of violence, but the poor plot made it difficult to appreciate. Especially with graphics like this which are fine if there is a gripping story line but the big climax was a fart. . . and a lot of laughing . . .
That's what humanity is all about...
A short film about a park bench
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