Score: 8
"You commented on someone alse not mine"
date: April 8, 2009
Well, well, look who it is...
~Plot~
Unstable. No humor, simple, not the most interesting story in world. At least in was slightly easy to follow.
~Animation~
Was the frame rate at 12? Please adapt to ~18-30, for smoothness. I personal use 24fps. Mostly, the animation was terrible. Background was boring and unfitting. You need a load more practice with Flash before you submit anything else. Very shotty.
~Sound~
Many new animators don't realizes how important using sound is. It really adds feeling and mood to a Flash. Instead of using cheap text bubbles, use voices. It keeps the viewer focused.
April 8, 2009
Author's Response:
That's incredibly immature.
