Score: 8
"Hey this was pretty neat!"
date: March 14, 2009
For your first flash, that is. Pretty simple flash design, in my opinion, but you came through in the end. I always tend to review an artist's first flash because I believe the first reviews an author receives impacts the artist the most. Therefore, I will comment on this.
Design: As I said, basic, but ok. Touch it up with some pivot sticks or maybe even real characters next time. Try to avoid choppiness.
Music: Some, kudos for adding it.
Maybe up the frame-rate.
I look forward to seeing your further work, keep practicing. Who knows? Someday you could be working for DreamWorks or Pixar animating complex 3D vectors in the smash blockbuster. Now isn't that every flash artist's dream. :P
I wish you luck in your endeavour.
~Spoopy~
March 14, 2009
Author's Response:
thanx a lot for the feedback...its very inspiring...and for my next animation regardless of what it is i wanted to use real characters and camera angles...etc. ..it should be more in-depth and detailed!!