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Mar 14, 2009 | 8:10 PM EDT

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This is my first flash movie..more to come!!

Reviews


3M19963M1996

Rated 2 / 5 stars March 26, 2009

"Nothing interesting"

Can be better,can be better.Keep workin'.



xDaRkNeSsxFaLlzxDaRkNeSsxFaLlz

Rated 2 / 5 stars March 15, 2009

eehh

not the best but not the worst. keep gettin better.

Give, Get, Respect



SpoopySpoopy

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 14, 2009

Hey this was pretty neat!

For your first flash, that is. Pretty simple flash design, in my opinion, but you came through in the end. I always tend to review an artist's first flash because I believe the first reviews an author receives impacts the artist the most. Therefore, I will comment on this.

Design: As I said, basic, but ok. Touch it up with some pivot sticks or maybe even real characters next time. Try to avoid choppiness.

Music: Some, kudos for adding it.

Maybe up the frame-rate.

I look forward to seeing your further work, keep practicing. Who knows? Someday you could be working for DreamWorks or Pixar animating complex 3D vectors in the smash blockbuster. Now isn't that every flash artist's dream. :P

I wish you luck in your endeavour.

~Spoopy~


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HeThinkzLikeNoOthEr responds:

thanx a lot for the feedback...its very inspiring...and for my next animation regardless of what it is i wanted to use real characters and camera angles...etc. ..it should be more in-depth and detailed!!


AhdrenAhdren

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 14, 2009

I got to the end...

So it was worth watching. The music was a little sudden, but for a first attempt your animation was decent. Plus an extra star for the 'sike' (by which we assume you mean pysch).



GeneralACGeneralAC

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 14, 2009

Pretty nice

Positives:Had good sound that went well with the music, Didn't jump with the frame work much or at all, Was quite interesting.

Negatives: Was slightly to short, Animation was not the best I have seen(Its your first animation so it is really good).

Overall: Brilliant, I really hope this passes.


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HeThinkzLikeNoOthEr responds:

thanks for the review..i didnt expected to get any kind of feed back on this..let alone anything good!!