Score: 8
"Kool."
date: March 14, 2009
I thought this was a really interesting flash. But like you said coulda used some sounds. Now by it sounds better with sound, did you mean you couldn't upload it w/ the sound it had? Or you would like to add some sound?
I think some slurp noises even, and something else to go with it, maybe some grotesque growth sound for the alien at the end, or something.
Start 5/10,
Could have used maybe a small back story for that worm thing. Even just 2 seconds showing it fall from space. (Even though its obvious its an alien)
Animation 8/10,
Really clean, and I liked the way you draw. The guy eating the alien looked kool. I think you could have added more to the alien that grew out, but not bad.
Voice and etc 0/10 (N/A),
There was no sound.
Story/Originality 7/10,
While the story of aliens infesting things has been done to death, this was a unique twist to that type of story. Well done. This could defently be used to make some kinda 'real length' story. You know something thats 1-2 mins long even. JUst show where the alien came from, how it 'infests' things when not eaten. And more on how it grows and then sends more babys out.
Overall 10/15 I liked it, just to short.
Voted 3/5
March 14, 2009
Author's Response:
I like your ideas.
But the worm thing isn't meant to be an alien, even though it does seem a lot like one. Anyway if the worm is an alien what would it make the deformed chicken man thing.
I haven't actually decided what the worm is meant to be anyway.
