I admit to really liking this at first. It was just great to see this goofy, surreal stuff. I do admit that it wasn't as good later on. I still enjoyed most of it. The animation was really funny. I'm glad you at least acknowledge the problem with the lip sync.

That gets annoying. I guess I wasn't expecting anything THAT violent. Then again, it was pretty cool. It wasn't even dark humor. It was just darkness.

alright

this is a little different than usual couzin.-pete

not bad

next time work on the animation a lil better other than that pretty dang good!!! keep up the good work!

...Eh...

I liked the beginning; I thought it was pretty funny... But then it just got... unnecessary, I guess would be the best word to describe it. "You broke my window. I'm going to murder you."

But yeah, keep this out of your portfolio. Try making something simple, and try making it more quickly (if possible; if you're new to Flash, then 2 months is okay for something like this, I suppose). Walk cycles, simple conversations, things like that. Unless they're asking you for something specific. Try to go for something less unnecessarily gory, and stay away from the sex jokes, too.

The animation that you did do was pretty good. I can see you going on and getting better. If you really stick to animating, you'll improve very quickly.

lol

i love the transition it is like watching a train wreck. you laugh your balls off at the beginning and then its like POW hahahaha. good stuff, nice animation, i just wish you could get someone else to do the voice of the father because the same voice for both characters throws it off