Ah, christ
Now this takes me back
Author Comments
This is flash i did for my college work, its really my first short animation, anything else ive done is a test, or just for learning sake. This isnt finished yet, still needs better animation in places, better colour and sound.
Also a new title screen, and possibly a pre loader.
Any advice/criticism would be greatly appreciated.
EDIT: Thanks for the positive reviews, i will admit that the tom selleck was stolen from family guy, just because i couldnt draw him well enough though my own style, i tried several times on paper, but it didnt look right and again, sorry for the lack of sound. I havent got to that stage in flash, im still learning :)
ahahahahaha
nice work i loved the ending lol
meh
its smooth animation but no sound at all and also it creeps me out a bit
good
i like the comb thing and theanimation at some parts but audio would have made it better
Good, I liked it!!
Really good, it may not need a preloader because it is a short movie, but what it really needs is sound. the animation is really neat in some parts, like the tongue, I liked the way you did it, where you may need to check the animation maybe the hands, and what you can do is use onion skins to make it easier to re-do your previous hand and just change the fingers, or one finger, etc.
I believe you are really good and you are going to do really cool stuff
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3.28 / 5.00
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- Mar 9, 2009
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- Comedy - Original