Score: 7
"Decent."
date: April 8, 2009
You explained it rather nicely, and there are minimal spelling and grammar issues.
Like when you had it say "zink". It's spelled Zinc.
/Scientific assholery
You're getting better.
You get a 7/10, because there should have been music, a little more interactivity (It says "Play This Game", so I expect there to be gaming), and a more scientific font could have nailed it, like Microsoft Unicode MS, and you could have made it type out, and have that little flashy box/underscore at the end.
But, you did a decent job.
On another note: What grade did you get?
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Still waiting to be unblocked,
<3Lunar
April 14, 2009
Author's Response:
well it was a movie... but it isn't in that catagory... it's more like a game with all the buttons.
And i have no clue... student teachers don't give marks back :( last year at elementry.
