Score: 8

"Very Good"

by: spiderkyle26

date: March 22, 2009

Consiedering its your first flash, this is very good. I've seen a lot of practiced flash artists do worse. One thing I would suggest is even thought it might take longer, spend more time on motion instead of just scribbling it in sometimes. The orange guy was good, but the grey people and the clouds could use some work. Also, considering your standing as an audio artist, you think you would do your own music. lol Well, this is pretty good.
Long live Nalgrounds

Score: 8

"For your first flash..."

by: dondrummer

date: March 15, 2009

...it was actually pretty good! The music fit the animation very well and it being simple, just gave that extra touch, alot of people try to go and do as many things as they can and they end up overdoing it. But you certainly didnt overdo it. Great Job!

Score: 8

"pretty good"

by: MysticZen

date: March 10, 2009

the simplicity of the 1 minute short was good, but sometimes i think it has some small short cuts which could be easily fixed.. which is the actual detail of the scenery...

Right now im working on a short movie from one of your songs (vivid Illusions) (after the failed attempt to get the NG Megamix onto flash, lol) and i think it does pay to redo some of the details.. But other then that, i think you might have something..

i wish you luck

Cheers
MysticZen

Score: 8

"Not bad."

by: Turnbolt

date: March 9, 2009

I liked the kinetic set.

I liked that the pace was frantic except for the main character (which is part of the point).

I like the message it sends.

I like the soundtrack and think the animation fits the music well.

I LOVE the simplicity of the whole thing... I really believe with a simple, profound message like this that less is more!

My only complaint is when you hit the "replay" button, you have to go back through all the opening credits which takes about 15 seconds it feels like. I would prefer to just watch the cartoon again at that point.

Score: 7

"solid."

by: Dannyortiz

date: March 9, 2009

the animation was smooth. the only that jumped were SUPPOSED to jump. the graphics are simple but clean and enjoyable. the soundtrack sounded repetitive until you get that flute-ish sound in there.
did youi intend on this being an artistic piece? casue it was a little boring that he just sits there. if there was a message there, by all means keep it going, but if you were jsut lazy than....work on it.

overall, 7 out of 10. one point off for me not getting the point, if there is a point to be undeerstood.