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Well here is the second animation.I know it's pretty short and i'm sorry about that.I promise the next animation will be at least one minute long :) .Thanks for watching.Rate and comment.
The next one should be longer. And I know you said that. And also, I would enjoy better graphics. It looked a bit sloppy with the lines sticking out in places where they don't need to. And maybe adding just 1 more shade would make them pretty appealing! So just consider that in your next animation.
There were some pretty good parts though. Frame rate was more than I expected when I saw the rating. As well as how the audio was awesome. You put in some nice sounds. So, great animation, just needed some more length and visual quality. So, good luck on your next animation, and nice job.
You should have put more work in it .It looks like it's been made in 1 hour .
it got roxxering grfics but i not git what go on
It's a start
Could use some work, my suggestions
1. Make it longer, its very short
2. Play up more the ironies of his accidents/misfortunes, it will make it funnier.
I Dont get wat its supposed 2 mean
and it wasnt funny i think
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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