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The first version of Gameboy DBZ Season 1! There will be new episodes of GBDBZ Season 1 soon.
Only one word to describe this movie...
Well the animation isn't bad, but the absence of a background was a serious detraction. Also give your viewers a replay button, don't just make it loop. I hate that! Another thing some more authentic DBZ sound FX would also be an improvement.
For one, I absolutely DESPISE movies that are made in Windows Movie Maker and then turned into flash, especially movies like this that could easily be made in flash instead. Secondly, what's up with the blank white space on either side of the video? Properly size your vids. Finally, it was much, much too short. You should have combined this one and your other one into a single movie.
Well, I'm glad to see somebody using some new sprites. It's a breath of fresh air. The music doesn't add much, but it doesn't take away much either.
Here are your problems however.
You need a background. Even if you want to do something simple, that's fine. It would reflect the sprites pretty well, which are simple themselves. A white background in completely unimpressive however. Using flash, you have no excuse to not add in a background. Just make another layer, use a brush, add a few lines... voila! Not too difficult, and it would add a lot.
Secondly, and this is a big one, you zoom out too far. It makes the sprites look fuzzy and undefined, and it's difficult to tell what's going on. If you want to zoom in and out a bit, that's fine, but please make sure that you can keep things in focus. Seeing little characters zoom around the screen and not being able to tell what they're doing is a big problem for a fight scene.
The static is okay I guess. It doesn't really add much or take away much, but the other problems are really hurting your cartoon.
I Don't Know
I'm not a real fan of random sprite fighting so it didn't rate to high for me but maybe if you put in a little setting and a story it would seem alot better. Best of Luck!
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