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this is my 2e submission. I hope you like it. but hopefully is it the first one to stay on newgrounds
NOTE: I've edited the movie so its longer has buttons and the story is beginning. when the movie is over you can listen to the castle song
WTF NOOB NOOB
Good. Needs work the animation is nice and all but it needs to be longer. Sound is almost at the right time. Just needs to be a little faster. Nice work.
working on it and now done with it
Well you've enticed me. The animation is fluid, but the sound clips sort of jump out, blend them in better or add some music.
about the music i have some trouble finding the right song.AFTER UPDATE: but now not anymore
A lot of improvement is needed on this, first of all the animation, it's very poor. Secondly you need some sort of reason why Mario is flying around, otherwise known as a plot. Finally you need to sync the sounds with what's actualy happening
i know i need to improve it and about mario flying away that's something you're going to find that out later. OK what about now
A short film about a park bench
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