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Yeah , the story sucks ... but you gotta admit , the animation is pretty good .
this is so goood and funny and the animation climbs the top of mount everawsum
Thanks , Poisened-noise !
Well i can't say i understand but then again i have never played Chrono Trigger
Still it looks very promising so you get a good rating.
Thanks , Wesley9997
Good animation, Bad story.
Audio - Just some half-baked sound effects, no music. You could really improve this point.
Graphics - The sprites are really good and they move swiftly through the screen, but you could make everything go a little slower, for the animation to be more clear. Also, you could work over that portal 0_0
Story - Really, a flash need a good story. You could try making things go a little slower (I know it will be more difficult to animate, but...) for ppl to understand the story, and you should also try to write a script (not AS -_-) to your story before making the flash. I heard that it helps a lot.
Overall - You could improve the story a lot, make some scenes slower and put some music / more enjoyable sound effects. The graphics are a good example of good sprite animation, and I would really enjoy it if you could get this flash to be better ^-^.
Okay , I'll keep that in mind . Thanks .
What little there was ... was confusing. Excellent sprite work but was there a story? The story needs work. Aside that it has potential.
Thanks , SailorPoison .
Lol you're right the story sucks but i gotta give you props for animation.
I think I'll take that as a compliment . It's funny ,cos people review badly for no proper reason , then they haven't even made 1 single flash .
It's the everyday happenings of weebl and sometimes weebl's friend bob!
Characters evolve, relationships develop, and what you think to be true turns out in quite unexpected ways.
The popular web comic, in animated form!
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