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UPDATE 3: Front page! Special thanks to the crew and everyone at NG.
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UPDATE 1: The easteregg has been fixed... in the sense that I moved it to the credits page, so now you can find it there if you are looking.
Hey everyone, hope you enjoy our latest Sketched submission, a lot of hard work went into this one so let us know what you think.
p.s. Easter egg?! Yep! It's nothing really mind blowing, moreso a reason for me to practice some more of my action scripting, but its there none the less.
Till next time, Enjoy.
I really liked it
it was a suddle humor compared to all the so called humor A.K.Arandom nonsense today.
I think the random humor has its time and place too. We try not to worry too much about what everyone else is doing, but it's good to know that our humor styles go appreciated as well. haha. Thanks for the review.
The voice acting really makes this flash.
Pretty good but...
I think you'd benefit alot by taking this to soundbooth or soundtrack pro and doing a little audio sweetening, maybe add some background music or sound effects. All in all really good work.
Although I am against adding background music where it isn't called for I do agree that more attention could go into the audio mix. I spend a LOT of time putting together the dialogue and cutting it so that it is quick paced and flows conversationally, but I don't spend nearly as much time considering sound effects and other filler sounds. I think there is a fine balance though, because too many sound effects would take from the reality of the situation and make it less funny.
Thanks for your review, I will certainly consider your suggestions for future shorts.
Good Audio Choice
Very funny video especially this time I should replay it and look for the easter egg next time the credits give out great people's names I like Maverick32183's music keep up the great work it's funny when the kids in the closet at the end of the video.
This was cute
And so in a big event or show when it ends there is not much left, But with this movie you have left an echo of all the effort and that shows off well with this one. This was a rather cute animation, the story played out well and made for some good humor, This could be great with some subtitles, nice artwork and character designs though. Overall this was a good flash submission, there was some Enhanced details that made this worthwhile and you gave it some good momentum, and it kept me interested so you did have the right stuff and such, Now dont get me wrong there is still plenty of room for improvments and more enhancments but for the time being its pretty good I thiught.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
What can I say or even suggest to improve on this, Not sure I have anything to suggest as you coverd all the basics, This could be great with some subtitles, but thats about it,
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