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The Line Ultimatum

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*Edit* I added a flash API, just to see whether or not I could actually do it. Also, If you feel so inlined, please recommend this for the experimental section. In addition, I can guarantee a sequel, as it is currently in the making! */Edit*

I've submitted crap before, but this is my first honest piece that I think won't get blammed. Please tell me what you think, its a sort of experimental delve into weirdness, but I think you might like it.

Thanks!

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i'm giving this in 8 bcoz...

I thought it was really good of course! The music flowed really well with your animation and i think with some time and effort, you could make this a brilliant flash! 8/10 4/5

You thought correctly.

I did indeed like this. The animation was fun to watch and the music did go well with your project. I would like to point out that you should have tried telling a simple story with this type of animation. No words or anything. Just show the same type (style) of animation but give it some direction. But I like this. It is artistic and that is what I love to see.

Ajgajg responds:

Thanks, I'll make sure to add a sort of story next time!

Not bad

Not bad, but not good, it doesn't suck, its not crap, as a matter of fact i think i like it, but there is nothing in there that makes me go: wow, gasp or lol.

Ajgajg responds:

Ya, I myself thought it might be considered mediocre, but hey, We all have to start somewhere.

I... liked it...

I actually love the concept, but the quality could be better. The song goes perfectly with the animation =) !

Ajgajg responds:

Ya, most of the beginning was pretty bad, quality wise, but I think it improved towards the end.

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5
Score
3.08 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 3, 2009
9:02 PM EST