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The Half Pipe

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rated 2.80 / 5 stars
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Experimental
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collab
half
pipe

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Mar 2, 2009 | 9:34 PM EST

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Author Comments

It is not done, and I know it isn't that good, which is why I would like some expert advice from the flash pros =). Not done yet....when the Pikachu goes insane I'm going to send in mobs of people...and eventually it will end with some normal kid skating down fine, no accidents...then when he ends up in the middle of the half pipe, a huge 'THE END' falls on him, thus ...ending...I definetly need sounds, but can you guys message me on a good Background music? Thanks. (will finish/refurbish it during summer break)

Reviews


chinkeeyongchinkeeyong

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad, but technique needs some work.

I must say this isn't a bad Flash. Your animation is pretty fluid, everything looks like it should, et cetera; the main problem is the explosions and flames which look like you just gave up and drew shit. These are incredibly difficult things to draw, but they really add a lot to an action-oriented short like this. If you went back and redrew all these effects, it would take a heck of a lot of time but look zillions of times better. The silence doesn't really detract from the work, but does kind of hamper the experience.
I voted 2. Hope to see improvement next time!


Lamnimator responds:

thanks for the review chinke...I'm probably not going to bother with the fire...but will most likely learn how to do better smoke...and probably fix the luigi-samus-pikachu part as it looks horrible xD


atomickeybladeatomickeyblade

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not Bad

It would be a bit better if you put in some music and a preloader


Lamnimator responds:

agreed (bg music suggestion plz)


IcePyroIcePyro

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

music makes the movie.

not even lieing, i might have voted 5 if you had music and a good soundeffects.


Lamnimator responds:

Yes i do need sound. please suggest good background music