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I Am Working On Number 2 Now !
And This Is Just A Side Project.
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Erm...what did I just watch?
Right... its alright...watchable to laugh at...because its so horribly random..
hard to follow...Sometimes can be hard to look at especialy when u have black words over a red bg.... or black words over a multicoloured bg..
I gave it six because of the music and the totall randomness.
I gave ur submission a vote of 4, you deserve it :D
Please try make it more appealing to look at tho
who would actually say "im really torn up about that it killed my parents".. especially when they're talking to their self... i guess what i'm saying is, try being more subtle and make the 'talking' more realistic.
My brain hurts.
The story kinda jumped around a little, and I kept wondering if I was really seeing what I was seeing haha. It was good though. Made me have to pay attention I like that.
Your animation isnt all that bad, I have seen worse.
This video was very random, I LMAO when he went "A million miles away at some lake"
Waiting for #2.
Where do I begin
Putting the art and animation aside, the story itself was horribly presented. The character was introduced very poorely. He explains his story too quickly and unappealingly. The story doesn't build up at all and speaking of the story it's kinda lackluster. I don't mean to be rude but I think you can do much better if you could take a little more time on the story. The second scene is very hard to follow. The scene with the fisherman seems kinda pointless esspecially without any visuals. The last scene is very hard to express but to put it simply, is very rushed and confusing. I would suggest spending a bit more time on your flash work before submitting. People here are very harsh critics and I wouldn't be surprised if this gets blammed.
I Am Not Angry With Your Comment And I Did Expect it To Be Blammed
Your early years of school ever teach you when captialisation is appropriate?
No Im Irish
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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