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Hey guys this (i hope) will be my first working animation on newgrounds and hopefully more to come. anyways leave me a comment if you have anything to say otherwise happy traveling on the information super highway.
You can probably do better than this since this was quite funny just needed to be animated a bit better.
Perhaps co author a person who is good at drawing.
thank you for the complimate and im glad you enjoyed the movie and keep your eyes open for THE WORKING TITLE 2. it should be out in a couple of weeks or so. anyways i think you again for you comment and you oppinions.
working on it...
this is kinda funny
the animation is kinda slow, but the speed of the dialaogue is way to fast if u have a whole paragraph to read...
thank you for the review and for the helpful tips and i hope that the next one will be better.
This animation was decent in some scenes,like where the second stickman shoots the other stickman with the gun.but in quite a few scenes the animation was a little choppy.the song choice was good though!so it needs improvement,but its not so bad.i have seen much worse.
thank you it was a lot of work and im glad you enjoyed it. and i hope the next video will be better.
what is that?
i don't think this is all you can do, there must be more. just try to improve your skills and do better, btw. the soundtrack is allright, that rescued al little in my opinion
thank you for your positive attitude and i hope my next installment will get a better response.
a working title indeed!
definitely keep working at it
you got something cooking
but my advice you need to spend
more hours on your work!
your own animation said so!
thank you for the advice and im happy you thought it wasn't the worst you'd ever seen... and i would appreciate any help such as links to a better sound fx website or anything at all. anyways im glad you enjoyed it and i hope the next installment is better.
A short film about a park bench
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