Score: 5
"Consider this a warm-up"
date: February 28, 2009
First of all, you're one of them developing animators. It's not in any one way a bad starting point for you.
By seeing this, this is telling about 90 to 93 percent of us that this does need improvement, so I don't need to say anymore about that.
But getting to the point, there's definitely room for improvement, in most fields. It's a basic animation that has a start, middle and cliffhanging end, and you have a simple storyline happening as well.
So overall, this is a simple animation with a fair mix of simplicity and dullness, which I mean the length of this animation.
Other users should already mention to you about other improvements on this submission.
Right then.... this review should help you in some way.
I'll buzz off in the meantime.
WZyndicate - 2/28/09
March 1, 2009
Author's Response:
:D noobzor
