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Episode one of Killer Rabbits. one of my first, rate and review ;) :D
I know its short but go easy its my first submission xD
this is the worst thing i have ever seen
Bad animation...Really bad.. 3/5 5/10 :/
make it longer
and not like 3 seconds
that was over 3 seconds
Consider this a warm-up
First of all, you're one of them developing animators. It's not in any one way a bad starting point for you.
By seeing this, this is telling about 90 to 93 percent of us that this does need improvement, so I don't need to say anymore about that.
But getting to the point, there's definitely room for improvement, in most fields. It's a basic animation that has a start, middle and cliffhanging end, and you have a simple storyline happening as well.
So overall, this is a simple animation with a fair mix of simplicity and dullness, which I mean the length of this animation.
Other users should already mention to you about other improvements on this submission.
Right then.... this review should help you in some way.
I'll buzz off in the meantime.
WZyndicate - 2/28/09
It's so crap...
it's epicly amazing.
A short film about a park bench
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