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don't blink or you'll miss the story line. its has all the story and plot twists of an entire season of naruto only without the fillers
I want to see the next episode!
I do not care if the "revenge" plot has been done before, b/c "person A getting revenge because of what person B has done" has been happening for millennia. It's what you do with the plot to bring the characters to life that matters. I think animation can almost always be improved upon, but the dialogue was crisp and to the point, letting the action do the work. I enjoyed it and way to leave us wondering what will happen next!
yes i did intend for the plot to be super cliché and cheesy. and it going to continue that way..(or will it?) idk yet but for those of you who complained about the graphics (on something that is essentially a stick figure animation no less) the next episode will be graphically enhanced. none the less the series promises to be epic
-thanks for the comments
menten5 (Mr. pwncakes)
its not perfect but it's a good concept and I hope to see more of it.
I wouldn't say outstanding, but reasonably good. I know how boring and frustrating animating can be and how hard it is too stay on task.
The graphics didn't really matter that much, though nicer graphics would be awesome. The story is cliché, but I'm sure people are willing too live with that.
Also, don't use scenes unless you don't have music playing, for the obvious reason it cuts off.
Well done with this.
Hehe pretty good man! just like the only suggestion im going to make is that u make the animations a bit smoother and have better graphics :P
Needs more work!
But a concept!
you should try improving some of the movement and possible the speech bubbles!
but it was okay!
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