hmm...
i dont like how the 10th lv right off the start the play button i click it and i am a millimeter away from an obstacle........ its like your making you game a spawn killer.....
Author Comments
I made a sequel to Avoidance, collect the golden coins and don't get hit by the other shapes. UPDATE i fixed the level 9 error. sorry about that.
Way better then the first one
Now all you need is maybe some music
flsh responds:
i'm glad you like it. be sure to check out Avoidence 3 when it comes out!
It's pretty cool
Good:
-Easy, simple gameplay
-Addicting
-Short load sreen
Bad:
-Too addicting?
Keep up the good work, let me know when your next stuff is in the run ?!?!!
-Marsvent
flsh responds:
thanks for the review, and be sure to check out Avoidence 3 when it comes out!
Much better!
This is by far a great improvement from your last one! I won't go into much detail because a lot of the stuff that I stated in my last review could also cover everything in this review.
Animation/Graphics - The circles and the square looked a lot better in this one than they did in the last one. The color was much better and the animation itself was much cleaner.
Story/Content - I really liked that you had to collect something in this one. I also liked that you had levels. Good job on making it more fun like this. I liked the fact that you had checkpoints. I recommend making the game a little longer though because it barely took me anytime to beat.
The only thing that I can see that is wrong is when you take your mouse of the screen on (for example lets use this side) the left side you can then move your mouse around the screen quickly to the right side and you will instantly appear on that side out of harms way of the green circles. If you want this there than I say keep it because it's a nice strategy if your stuck, but if you don't want that there than I would recommend making it so when they do that the square travels across the screen to get to the other side.
Audio - The music is ok, but if you lose the level and try again the music stops. I recommend fixing this so people can listen to the music during the entire game instead of it stopping.
Overall - You improved a lot from the last one, but there seems to be a lot of things to still work out. Good luck and keep working.
flsh responds:
thanks a lot for the review, i'm working on my flash to make it a lot better before i go ahead and submit something again. once again, thanks for the very constructive and helpful review.
pretty good
the idea was good, and i imagine the first game was as fun. the animation could have been better. a few shapes mostly circles. perhaps a chaange in backround too like a moving one you had to avoid also would have been a good idea. music was suitable overall pretty good coulod do with imorovement
flsh responds:
thanks a lot for the comments. i'll use some of your ideas if i make another. i'm bad at art, so most of the shapes are circles, but i'm working on it!
