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Feb 22, 2009 | 1:11 PM EST

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This is something I've been working on for nearly a month, only because I was really lazy. Another one of these traditional animation thingies, I was trying to go for the old timey style of animating and it turned out pretty well for that.

This was really fun to see all of this come together, so hope you guys like it.

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44dman4444dman44

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Boring

It was slow moving and the music was no good so i would say il give you 7 stars for a good effort.



tricky17tricky17

Rated 4 / 5 stars

is.........fine

is not bad but yu need more colors best music and this was reall short



spoiler911spoiler911

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Way to old

The joke was old and the animation was way too old. Nice try, but no cigar.


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JimmyCameltoeJimmyCameltoe

Rated 4 / 5 stars

great

nice, I LIKE THAT



SlackmanSlackman

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad!

Well, I can definitely appreciate that you've done this by hand. It gives the cartoon a special look, something different which you don't see that much nowadays. Thumbs up for putting in the extra effort.

The music also fits pretty well. The one thing I would change about the music is the ending. The ending at least looks like it's supposed to be a bit surprising, and if you use a change in music to help emphasize that, it'll help. For a great example of what I'm talking about, check out Jerry by HotDiggetyDemon, seen here: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /384664. You'll see what I mean.

As far as the animation goes, it's pretty decent, but you should have a bit more fun with it. If he's going to hit the button, use some anticipation. Maybe he winds up first. Most of the animation is straightforward, and it would be a bit more interesting if the character had some quirk to his movements. Also, I think you hold the timing for the fall just a little bit too long. If it really took that long, and the character was just standing there, he would probably step onto solid ground. You might want to try to have him freak out a bit or jump before he falls, or just not hold it for so long.

I love the expressiveness of the drawings, particularly at the end. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what you do next!


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