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This is a short flash animation I made for a school law project. It details the daily activities of the inmates in my made up jail. It was a big hit in my presentation. I am not that good at animating so please don't be too harsh in the comments.
I hope you enjoy :)
I think its very informative! :) I love the simplicity of a simple day schedule. The animating is decent and it is a very well done project. :D
Good Job ! :)
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I thought this was pretty good, except the eating animation looked weird.
It was a decent factual presention, the graphics and animation were done well, adding more sound effects would have been an improvement. maybe you could also have added the procedures for emergencies such as prision riots or something to add some excitement to it.
Graphics:the graphics weren't to bad.Some heads could be a bit shorter but that's it.Your graphics were very clear in how everything was in jail.Although I missed something things like work,fights and that kind of thing.
Sound:Too bad you didn't have any sound.You could have to done some background to keep it a bit more exciting cause was a bit to educational maybe.
Fun:At least it was something else from the usual thing you see on newgrounds.
I also missed an intro and a end.That would've make a bit more of a movie.
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