Score: 10

"'ello Archmage"

by: InfernoFalcon

date: April 21, 2009

Remember me....From scratch?...Thought not.

I thought this was pretty good, except the eating animation looked weird.

Score: 7

"Decent"

by: Greycut40

date: February 22, 2009

It was a decent factual presention, the graphics and animation were done well, adding more sound effects would have been an improvement. maybe you could also have added the procedures for emergencies such as prision riots or something to add some excitement to it.

Score: 6

"not bad"

by: TheSilverClaw

date: February 22, 2009

Graphics:the graphics weren't to bad.Some heads could be a bit shorter but that's it.Your graphics were very clear in how everything was in jail.Although I missed something things like work,fights and that kind of thing.

Sound:Too bad you didn't have any sound.You could have to done some background to keep it a bit more exciting cause was a bit to educational maybe.

Fun:At least it was something else from the usual thing you see on newgrounds.

I also missed an intro and a end.That would've make a bit more of a movie.

Thesilverclaw

Score: 5

"Hmmm..."

by: Fingercake

date: February 22, 2009

There were some things i would have done better but I can tell you probably spent a good amount of time trying to make it.

Score: 7

"Well-informed, truthful, but a bit unrealistic"

by: LBRocker

date: February 21, 2009

That's the way the routine goes. You were very clear with the information. But I think you Candy-Coated it a little. I understand it was a school project and all, but you forgot to imply that sometimes there is trouble. Prison isn't really as nice as depicted.

Aside from that, you did well. The artwork was ok. I liked the way you did the leg motions. The fork moving was good too. Did you use pivot? I'm sorry, I'm not familiar with animation programs.

Good job. 7/10. I look forward to more.