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Hashiana - River Lullaby

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Feb 21, 2009 | 3:42 PM EST

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if you watch, please let me know what you think, i know this isn't the best but i'm putting it up anyways, its not like i could lose anymore, but i have the mp3 for all of the movie "The Prince of egypt" so i wanted to do the whole movie, so i'm doing the movies first, so if it doesn't make sence, it will when i'm done from the part 1 of 10, it has it in there so it'll work anyways^^ /portal/view/483723 the original english version

Emily, Cassidy and Fianna O'Brian (c) Emily Cook

Audio (c) The Prince of Egypt/Dreamworks

Animation (c) Myself


Mild explicit audio since its dealing with god? i don't know how to put this under, but other than that its pretty much allowed...



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Nice sing, ok flash

The lips syncing was good and the characters looked pretty good. I suggest working on your backgrounds a little more (the ones in the beginning looked pretty good, but near the ones it was hard to tell what the background was) and maybe try putting in some more animation, but other then that I like it. Keep up the good work and good luck on future flash's

CelticIrishLass92 responds:

thank you, if you wish, i am working with teh whole movie, i've got everything finished, i just need to get it to work^^


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Your animation is good, but sloppy.

Before you work on any grand movies, work on cleaning up the flash a bit. There are a lot of places where the animation 'pops' (where the drawings aren't aligned from one frame to the next so it jumps [like in the first few seconds of this one]), and there's a lot of coloring outside the lines as well. Your sound is good, not too loud, and it's sync'd right. It's the animation that needs work. It makes it look like you rushed and didn't care, and I know that you do care.


Rated 1 / 5 stars

Needs work

Okay...well, I can appreciate what you're trying to do here, but right now the execution could a bit of work. The animation (while passable for a short or a collab) is pretty boring. There isn't a lot of movement or expression, and when you're dealing with biblical stuff you want that. It was too long for me as well, and the music just didn't fit the scene. I'd try this again, but work on your animation and try to have a bit more than "baby going into water" as your plot on any upcoming submissions. A final thought...why are they all mice? No points off for that, but I was really confused.

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Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


It could have been a lot better if you haven't forgot a "play" button. I had to right-click, disable and re-enable "Play" to make it start. Graphically... it was quite poor, but the few lip-syncing was at least accurate, and the song, despite sad, fitted.
It was just too short. I'll vote it 2 because I don't think it deserves a blam, but you have a lot to improve. Good luck.