Score: 10

"Great work"

by: Lonesoul

date: February 21, 2009

The only story who I couldn´t beat was the humans.
At the door in the cave,it seems I never handle it do press the button in time.
A bug,or am I simply to lame?
(I would wonder,´cause I even made the Dwarfenstory with no problem.)

Score: 9

"very nice"

by: qazuni

date: February 20, 2009

i liked it a lot
obviously, it would have been better if it was longer, but you stated before thaty it was a test, so i will not hold that against you
i liked how you had the option to back up instead of having to start all over again
you said that you were planning on making a better one, so i have some sugestions for you ^^

-you definetly should add some graphics
-another idea that came to mind, was possibly some more interactive scenes. for example: on the human adventure, when you have to find the key, maybe have a "point and click" adventure scene where you actually have to find the key.
-of course, you would probably want to add more than 3 choices for levels

this reminded me A LOT of those "choose your own adventure" books and i thought that it was a very creative concept, and a lot different from most of the overdone cliched games that most people submit.

i hope to see the sequel soon, as I am anticipating it.
if you want any more ideas, feel free to PM me, as i am very willing to help ^_^

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~~~~Qazuni

Score: 8

"Better than expected."

by: Paugus

date: February 20, 2009

Until I realized this was a text adventure, I was a bit dubious, especially with no game-picture.
But I love these games, always have. ^^ Just a note though - the speed for the clicks on Hard was perfect, but you might want to give a bit more time on Medium. Easy seemed to have a good amount of time. I can't wait for you to bring out bigger and better adventures like this.

Score: 8

"Click is too fast..."

by: kingler999

date: February 20, 2009

I really liked the storylines. I think I had all the endings. Great game but sometimes the click was just too fast.

Score: 10

"Don't listen to the naysayer below..."

by: reddeye5

date: February 20, 2009

....he probably wasn't even around when text adventures were all the rage. It would be awesome to make a whole quest version of this with outdoor exploring and branching paths as well.