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please use common curtisy on comments or remarks i am putting this on here for a kid i know.
very good animation, you could use sound next time.
My little brother made this
He made this before he had flash soft ware and had to use a shitty online thing, so fore the effert he put into this with the meager reasourses he had to work with he deserves a standing ovation, I vote 5 for for efort.
You have some ability drawing. but the timing in this piece is almost painful. It goes by slow as molasses. You have to remember your audience, and this is the internet audience, meaning that pretty much everyone's going to have the attention span of a squirrel on a caffeine rush. Your shots last too long. Keep them just long enough for people to get the point, after that your audience will get bored by it.
On top of that, some audio would seriously help. It helps maintain interest and adds to the piece for multiple other reasons.
The characters are well drawn and aesthetically pleasing though, you should take pride in that.
It was dull, really not funny. And please, please, use a spellcheck or something next time. It's written "sketchpad". With a "K"!
Newgrounds is a place where you are supposed to show flash animations to the world, NOT just some kid or whatever.
made me lose my attention
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