Score: 5

"Hmph."

by: blue3lf

date: February 19, 2009

I was getting excited because the fighting was really picking up and looking good and then BAM: The End.
That was a rather big letdown :(

Score: 3

"errrrrrrrm"

by: aabbcc7912

date: February 19, 2009

why are they fighting it was cool but they go boom then she pulls out like a fuckin pistol o well oh toooo short

Score: 7

"Should be better for the length, and your skill."

by: YungJazz

date: February 19, 2009

I won't judge this movie for the length, but for it to be less than a minute, and with your drawing skill (I see it) this should've been much better. It was very animated, which is more than I can say for a lot of flashers on here (including myself), but the timing and the movements need some work. Most of the time, the fighting looked like it didn't have much force or impact, but it wasn't fluid either like a 'graceful' fight. Maybe add some ease so that the movements look more convincing next time around, and it'll really juice your stuff up. Also, please for the love of god don't bother adding dialogue if there's no VA, it just takes away from the animation here, ESPECIALLY since their mouths... don't... move... But you're very good though, I love your drawing style, it's just that drawing style can't carry a cartoon by itself, even a short one. Wanna see more.

Score: 9

"Never bring a knife to a gun fight"

by: 1337ERROR

date: February 18, 2009

Or was it that the women was being a total cheating bitch. Cause the guy had a look on his face like if i knew you had a gun i would have brought a bigger one.

Good animation liked the black and white stuff, clean up the animation and longer would have been nice. Nice cliff hanger better than most.

Score: 8

"Well..."

by: zcrick

date: February 18, 2009

Hey, yeah, that was great. Would have been better had it been more than 15 seconds long, but the animation itself was excellent.