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Feb 16, 2009 | 4:51 PM EST

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This time 'the yellow man' tries to find his luck playing with a ball in the woods,
after his 'trip to the mountains' ended dramatical (watch my previous movie for details.).
Hopefully, he has better luck this time...

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FudgeMellowFudgeMellow

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 16, 2009

definatly mysterious

that was a strange little animation. it was pretty good animation although the crow was a little choppy. nice music choice too. i must admit the yellow character was a little silly looking. and the tear scene was a little cheesy looking. but pretty good stuff. you should make some more mysterious based stuff. you seem good at this. :]


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youassassinyouassassin

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 16, 2009

Wow man good stuff

Originality: 5/5
Wow very original great in graphic style and plot style.
Graphics/Animation: 3/5
The graphics are well...
Better than I could do, but there is a lot of better stuff out there. You could use some work with your main character make him more of a serious character, or add some more detail to him. Average. 2.5/5
The animation has plenty of movement and keeps the view into the movie which few people put into their animations, but the animation movement itself lacks. but overall good. 3.5/5
Sound/Voice: 4.5/5
Great use of sound with the graphics. 5/5
Ambient noise and music. I simply cant place my finger on it but it is lacking in something sorry I can't be of help. 4/5
Plot: 5/5
Even though I didn't get the ending, the animation sure "moved" me. It was very original and the way it flowed was amazing. The mystery shrouded in the creek was very well keep, well... mysterious.
Overall: 17.5/20 = 8.8/10
The graphics all in all seem amateur, but the story and how it's put together are professional. (you're a good writer i bet)

Final Score:
9/10 (4.5/5) (rounded up cuz it was awesome)


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RoelofPino responds:

Thanks for the helpful review!
You bet I am a writer, but I am not ;)