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This time 'the yellow man' tries to find his luck playing with a ball in the woods,
after his 'trip to the mountains' ended dramatical (watch my previous movie for details.).
Hopefully, he has better luck this time...
that was a strange little animation. it was pretty good animation although the crow was a little choppy. nice music choice too. i must admit the yellow character was a little silly looking. and the tear scene was a little cheesy looking. but pretty good stuff. you should make some more mysterious based stuff. you seem good at this. :]
Wow man good stuff
Wow very original great in graphic style and plot style.
The graphics are well...
Better than I could do, but there is a lot of better stuff out there. You could use some work with your main character make him more of a serious character, or add some more detail to him. Average. 2.5/5
The animation has plenty of movement and keeps the view into the movie which few people put into their animations, but the animation movement itself lacks. but overall good. 3.5/5
Great use of sound with the graphics. 5/5
Ambient noise and music. I simply cant place my finger on it but it is lacking in something sorry I can't be of help. 4/5
Even though I didn't get the ending, the animation sure "moved" me. It was very original and the way it flowed was amazing. The mystery shrouded in the creek was very well keep, well... mysterious.
Overall: 17.5/20 = 8.8/10
The graphics all in all seem amateur, but the story and how it's put together are professional. (you're a good writer i bet)
9/10 (4.5/5) (rounded up cuz it was awesome)
Thanks for the helpful review!
You bet I am a writer, but I am not ;)
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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