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Author Comments
The sequel to the LOZ: The Light Rupee pt. 1. Hopefully this one is better. Sorry about the crappy sound effects but I'll improve it in the third one. This one is a tiny bit longer then the first.
Reviews
Rated 3 / 5 stars February 21, 2009
Nice improvements.
At least there we're some sounds and short music clips throughout the flash and it was a bit more animated and longer,not great but better than the first one.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 17, 2009
much better
much better than the first, the sound makes all the difference!
I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 16, 2009
Yeah it's okay
It's okay that you've chosen not to use voice acting, but at some time's I was kinda confused who was saying what.
Also it would be cool if the viewer could decide when to go to the next sentence.
By that I mean
"Line"
CLICK
"Line"
That way dyslectic people can enjoy your movie too :P
I think that you shouldn't really worry about the animating skills. If I were you I'd put more time into writing the script.
If it helps I'd recommand you to write a script for part 3 and send it over to some people to get their opinion.
I'd be happy to give you some advise on the script if you would send it to me.
Who knows perhaps I'd even animate some things for you if you need help :)
I recommand you to watch this flash:
y.a. Legend Of Zelda
It's made by KoNeJo
You can find it on newgrounds.
Well peace out.
Thanks If you want I could send the script to you for pt. 4 but I already started pt. 3.
Rated 3 / 5 stars February 16, 2009
Not bad.
You seem to be getting the basics down with spriting. Now when you make your third episode, you can focus a little more on humour and just maybe the length of your movie (it was, after all, a little short).
Don't lose hope, though, you seem to have Flash partly under your control. Work hard, put pride into your submissions, and one day you'll be a bigshot.
-Xenifus
Red Mage Studios
Thanks and the third one will be longer and better.
Rated 3 / 5 stars February 16, 2009
ONE DETAIL! ONE DETAIL!
Have Zelda getting it up the ass by a deku... the humor was meh, descent when i see LoZ i relly hope its gunna kick me in da balls
Thanks for the review and I'll try better.