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Baby Browning Episode 2 "Networking"
Find out what life is like for Browning, a medical marvel, and his parents Eric and Susie as they try to navigate life and all its obstacles as parents of Baltimore's first pooh baby.
"Baby Browning" is a series that was created by Southpaw Productions (New York) and animated by toon53productions cc (South Africa).
So Episode 1 got a Daily Prize, FRONT PAGE and over 28 000 views ( IN 4 DAYS )!!
For all of you that have been waiting, here's Episode 2!!!
It isn't as good as the first one.
I really liked the first one, it had some great jokes, and, even though the whole joke was about poo, the jokes weren't puerile or immature. And it was pacey, with jokes coming left right and centre.
But this one, you went for the German Sheisse porn jokes, and seemed to slacken off the pace a bit. Now, some of the jokes were quite good, there's a potential gold mine of jokes you can do. But I feel you introduced it too early. I mean, the series is still finding its feet, and to put this out there when it isn't well established, it just didn't work. Maybe you should've put this for episode 4, or 3 at the soonest, but not 2.
I seriously hope you do make a whole series of this, cos it's really good stuff, and you can make it really funny, as you showed with the first one. Lay off the poo-eating side of things though, cos, it's about a baby. It's too grotesque to have that sort of jokes.
There's many scenarios you can have. Maybe a baby shower or something, or the parent taking out the baby for a play date, I don't know. But, don't stray too far into strange fetishes, it just doesn't suit the feel of the series.
Anyway, that said, I really hope you make a third one, I'll be waiting to see what you do next.
Not as great. . .
as your other episode, the comedy itself was slacking for my liking and didn't pace itself as the first one; I can understand with the storyline, there might be problems in making this as awesome for the general public and might only be suitable for certain viewers, with certain tastes. From these two episodes you've done so far, I think you're going to have it harder to continue the series.
From a general aspect, the artwork was still amateur, but I'm not complaining, it done it's job, and is alot better than most other crap that is unleashed upon the portal, but you pulled through okay, and kept it on the line with the first episode, well done.
As I said in the beginning, the comedy and style of this series, isn't my cup of tea, and I think you're falling a little from your last episode, and I might add, your first episode was quite awesome. Don't take that as an insult, I feel if you bang your game up a bit, this might be whole lot better.
Re-capping;- this episode defiantly didn't match the awesomeness of the first, and I hope you won't finish this series yet, it's got the potential to be awesome, so good luck with the rest of your flash career.
Serious role reversal
Its like Susie is more the "husband" of poo baby producing family and Eric....well he's just a tad oblivious
this seems like it's gonna be an awesome series, keep it up.
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