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A short flash about a fish, I feel the qulity is okay considering its all drawn with a mouse, and this is my first flash. Please could you leave feedback on how I can improve in the future.
Hope you enjoy!
it still needs some work. keep working on it.
Bad: too short
What was the point of this. seriously.
There was something about it...
Probably the music, scary fish btw :P
You wish for feedback and how you can improve for the future, the answer is mainly: Stage.showMenu = false - on the first frame.
just not cool enough for a 10.
I was not expecting the end lol, it was pretty random and funny hahaha.
Overall, I really liked the art style, even though you had to use your mouse instead of some sort of tablet or something, it was nice. The animations were fluid and not hard to look at (like most flash animations hahaha) and all around the brush smoothing was laid out nicely, which made for a good looking flash.
The sound was pretty good, not too much, not too little, and you didn't let it take up the full flash size. In all, it was a good animation. Good job. :)
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