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Not bad for a start.

It was a nice little beginning though it could have used at the very least some sound and/or music,needless to say improvements need to be made in nearly every aspect but it's still not completely horrible cause even a little effort was put in this.

Improvements needed

Usually i don't like a lot of swearing in flashes unless it's put in a humorous way, which you did. Don't worry about the length so much as long as it's good because I've seen short flashes before that I like. Still, you should make it a bit longer. You need to make the font bigger, but not too big. I could read it, but it would make it easier to read for other people.
I know you said there is no audio, but for future ones, you should put some in. As for the voice acting, again, you don't need it. Their was no talking in the LOZ: Ocarina of Time, or Majora's Mask (I haven't played the other ones above the N64) unless I'm mistaken, so no voice actors. I also like how Navi and Link don't get along and start swearing at each other, but they still stick together (unless Link is too busy running away from her LOL).
It needs credits at the end, or you could make a main menu, and have it as an option. A scene selection option would be another great addition to the main menu, so people can get to their favorite parts.
Now i haven't made a flash yet, but take this review into consideration. Keep up the good work.

What?

Haha I agree with that dude below me (Pianogod)...for the most part.

This flash is a touch [A TOUCH, meaning very small amount] short.
-> And if you'll be making 3 a week, fuck even 1 a week. This is more than long enough
(feels good to swear and not worry that my reveiw will be deleted)

Voice actors, bah who needs em. Id rather read text than listen to the shity ones, such as bad vices and squealchy sound files.

When link fell, you should have shown Navi tripping him

And when the deku tree says "Is this link?" Have him make a wtf face

stuff like that in my opionion would improve the flash. But either way your doing great :)

There some improvement that can be made

The story is not that bad, and I love how you use a lot of swear words in there, and make it so fucking funny. But there are some improvement that can be made for this.

#1: Make the fonts big. I could barely read that the characters were saying, except the Deku Tree.

#2: Put a "to be continue" at the end of the flash, with credits too. It feels ackward when someone just cuts the flash off in the middle of it, and goes striaght back to the preloader.

#3: I know you mention it, but still I have to put it down, you need audio, and music, and (maybe possible) voice actors, to add in the flash.

#4: You mention it too, but still again I have to put it down, you need to make it a little longer then that. If you're going to make a series, you have to make the episodes really long, but not too long.

Well, there you go, those the things that needs to be made in order for this to be improve, so far you have a 8/10, add them and it would will be a 10/10, well for me that is. I can't wait to see what you do next.

the 3rd thing

the font was very small. i don't need glasses and i could barely read it.
not bad though otherwise