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First id like to thank every one who helpd to get rid of the last one i submited as i meesd it up.
i jst made this game to see how i got on with it.
i wd like some feedback on haw i could make it better and longer please.
very simple and fun.WARNING:No thinking zone
man, i killed my dude 50 times!
Nice little game
Did I win or lose by shooting my self to get out? I didn't wan't to shoot my self [just yet] I thought I would take it and advance lol. Maybe add a "Shoot Self" option or something.
It was a little to easy to advance, maybe add a little more to click through like two extra rooms with nothing needed in them or something.
Back story is also good (Such as why your in the room) Even simple ones like
"You awoke after partying all last night. You awoke with a sore head and don't know whats going on.
You wish you had some coffee..."
Even something like that, its simple and took me maybe 15 seconds, but every little thing adds up.
Keep em coming :)
you win by shooting yourself i didnt know what to do next and i started to mess it up so i decided to end it.
i will deffinatl;ey add more rooms and a back story to the next one i make thanks.
It was a quality game and a great start it just needed to be longer an also needed an added challenge instead of arrows telling the player where to go. Please make more and don't listen to people who tell you it sucked :)
for the 50 seconds it took to beat it.
Shoot swords, teleport and don't mess with the turtles
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