Be a Supporter!

Fire Storm. Prologue.

Score:
rated 2.46 / 5 stars
Views:
3,856 Views
Share Links:
Genre:
Action
Tags:
fire
storm
prologue

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Feb 14, 2009 | 2:09 PM EST

If you liked this, check these out!


Author Comments

Ever since the last war, the Black and Red leagues of sticks were enemies. They both wanted one thing. The blue stick. He had powers. The power to control the 4 elements. Everyone wanted him for his powers, so that they can defeat thier enemies. But he wanted no part of thier war...

Reviews


Bloodman101Bloodman101

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Haha, Great!

Oh well, it wasn't bad its great you used buttons and such for a change, and music was pretty good..

Improvements:

Dialogue needs to move by faster and make it more easy to understand for some users.
It all looked like Ms Paint, it needs more animation.
Needs to be smoother and not so choppy, thats the reason why Me and Matt and some other members wanted you to practise and show us on Spamtheweb, the more you make, the better you get.
Work on your drawings a bit too. ;)
Ended too quickly for a prologue.

Strong Points:
Good storyline.
Buttons.
Music that matches the scene.
Original storyline.

Great story and music, maybe next time add something to the sticks that are unique like clothes or scars.

Also, I forgot to mention that you put greater effort into the Menu, And the extras was a nice addon!
7/10 for the effort! :)

Hope you reply and make more. lol.


People find this review helpful!
Traid333 responds:

Thanks so much for this review. I will work harder. I am currently working on my Madness series: Madness X.


GallexGallex

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Wha....?

Was this done in MS Paint? :O
It certainly looks that way, plus, make the writing easier to read, and I don't like 'To Be Continued's.
Give it a 5 for its Music...=\


People find this review helpful!

RoutanneRoutanne

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not to shabby

I like the story line, but would like to see more of it animated. Such as the house when it was burning, and it showing more sceens while its telling you the story. Stuff like that.


People find this review helpful!

markormarkor

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

Is this a real story?


People find this review helpful!

shikamaru819shikamaru819

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

too soon

i wish you wouldve took the time to make it longer but it seems like it could be good,just too short


People find this review helpful!