Score: 7

"Haha, Great!"

by: Bloodman101

date: February 14, 2009

Oh well, it wasn't bad its great you used buttons and such for a change, and music was pretty good..

Improvements:

Dialogue needs to move by faster and make it more easy to understand for some users.
It all looked like Ms Paint, it needs more animation.
Needs to be smoother and not so choppy, thats the reason why Me and Matt and some other members wanted you to practise and show us on Spamtheweb, the more you make, the better you get.
Work on your drawings a bit too. ;)
Ended too quickly for a prologue.

Strong Points:
Good storyline.
Buttons.
Music that matches the scene.
Original storyline.

Great story and music, maybe next time add something to the sticks that are unique like clothes or scars.

Also, I forgot to mention that you put greater effort into the Menu, And the extras was a nice addon!
7/10 for the effort! :)

Hope you reply and make more. lol.

Score: 5

"Wha....?"

by: Gallex

date: February 14, 2009

Was this done in MS Paint? :O
It certainly looks that way, plus, make the writing easier to read, and I don't like 'To Be Continued's.
Give it a 5 for its Music...=\

Score: 7

"Not to shabby"

by: Routanne

date: February 14, 2009

I like the story line, but would like to see more of it animated. Such as the house when it was burning, and it showing more sceens while its telling you the story. Stuff like that.

Score: 7

"Not bad"

by: markor

date: February 14, 2009

Is this a real story?

Score: 7

"too soon"

by: shikamaru819

date: February 14, 2009

i wish you wouldve took the time to make it longer but it seems like it could be good,just too short