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umm sum1 tell me how to start music over song:drive by Incubus this is my valentines day submission 4th flash ive done tell me how to improve! hope u enjoy it :)
Mediocre, can improve
1) I felt that the movie itself was a bit short.
2) While I do like your style, sometimes the animation did look a bit too rough, so you couldn't completely tell what was going on.
3) I think that the "jump productions" intro would have been better after the preloader rather than before.
4) The song was ok, but you could have made a better choice of song tbh.
But I hated the music very much.
nice Vday flash
I like your sketchy style, it is very loose and fun. The facial proportions seem a bit off, but your frame by framing was good, and although it was short, it was a nice one and enjoyable to watch.
It was okay I guess..
There was nothing wrong with the animation style, I'm open to a lot of styles, but this didn't go on for long enough...=\
Thought it was crap
But FBF makes it more interesting to watch than most of the stuff on NG, good job and keep it up.
(nice song choice)
A short film about a park bench
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