Erik the Juiceman
The story of a lazy kid and the people who live at his place. Sometimes stuff happens.
Jim the Cat
Follow Jim and his friends on a series of crazy adventures! Just don't bother Jim while he's enjoying his reefer!
here is my first flash
i liked to thank hunter (jhj232)
for the story board
i hope you enjoy!!!
plz rate and comment
pluz its on youtube too
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=a9YM-PHmLWg
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars September 27, 2009
Not bad...
I take it this was one of your first works (also because you only have 3 submited so far haha) i just think its a bit fast paced and not very understandable at some parts, also there is a big change in sound volumes xD
while they are speaking you can hear them so so but then the final music comes and its really loud xD
keep it up! ;)
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 12, 2009
lol........
next time ...make it a little(a lot) longer
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 11, 2009
...
The animation was crappy, but I laughed... :D
Rated 4 / 5 stars February 11, 2009
:) cool
Wow, your first flash... I remember my days back on flash 6... so old... But overall it was okay. Work on your graphics! Get Photoshop 8-cs4 and play around. that always helped me.
8/10
4/5
-Jim {SVSA}
Rated 3 / 5 stars February 10, 2009
::Felt rushed::
This felt very rushed. The animation and the graphics didn't flow well and weren't that great at all. The idea of the flash however of coke cans talking and the resounding punchline of life being taken was exhibited very well.
::Overall::
The artist seems to have a good grasp of humour, it just doesn't work well with the graphics and animation of this flash though. Improvement of animating will help in future flash entries.
::Aci6::