Save Energy by El-Swift-O



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Submitted: 02/09/2009 | 08:51AM EST

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Genre: Comedy - Original

Current Score: 3.53 / 5.00

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= This is my very first flash submission! =

Please enjoy my submission and rate fairly. All criticism is welcome! please when reviewing take into account:

= Use of Sound
= Animation Quality
= Comedic Effect
= Overall Appeal

Thank you very much for watching

El-Swift-O

Edit: This is a re-submission, I had to add a pre-loader which I also made myself to allow people to view the piece. I hope it's working for you! x-x-x

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Average Score: 9.0 / 10

Score: 5
Get-lost

"Keep going"

date: February 10, 2009

It's a nice idea. You could try using more angles to make the piece more interesting. Maybe a scene when you see the mess he made? Moving cameras are also a good way of creating more interest. Keep going and practice alot :)

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Score: 9
toughy

"ehem...."

by: toughy
date: February 9, 2009

you got it wrong..... your spos to WASTE energy, not save it. eh the person with zelda pick has it all covered, not much to say except: WASTE ENERGY DONT FRIGGIN SAVE IT.

want to know why? ill leave you to think about that.....................

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Score: 10
ellebirdy23

"Hey Good Job"

date: February 9, 2009

I love your take on that. I know people who are Save Energy FANATICS and when you leave a light on accidentally or turn the heater on over 70 degrees, they FREAK OUT.
^_^

I would've loved if this was longer. The animation was well drawn.
The use of sound was pretty good, but I would lower the levels a little next time; it sounded very "placed."

But still, this is an excellent First Flash.
4/5
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Score: 10
Daemonrus

"Hmm..."

date: February 9, 2009

Its your first flash. Mine was waaaay worse (I didn't submit it into newgrounds). Definitely you've got some talent.
So for the criticism:
= Use of Sound - 4.5 / 5 (Some sound needed for the "?" mark
and the light bulb appearing)
= Animation Quality - 4.5 / 5 ( Well it wasn't much to animate but you did great )
= Comedic Effect - 5 / 5
= Overall Appeal - 4.5 / 5
A good score for a first flash.

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Score: 10
ShatrdSkatr

"For your very first flash"

date: February 9, 2009

It is very good, it blows those stupid "maze" games away! Keep up the good work, aside from being short - It was good :)

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