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= This is my very first flash submission! =
Please enjoy my submission and rate fairly. All criticism is welcome! please when reviewing take into account:
= Use of Sound
= Animation Quality
= Comedic Effect
= Overall Appeal
Thank you very much for watching
Edit: This is a re-submission, I had to add a pre-loader which I also made myself to allow people to view the piece. I hope it's working for you! x-x-x
It's a nice idea. You could try using more angles to make the piece more interesting. Maybe a scene when you see the mess he made? Moving cameras are also a good way of creating more interest. Keep going and practice alot :)
you got it wrong..... your spos to WASTE energy, not save it. eh the person with zelda pick has it all covered, not much to say except: WASTE ENERGY DONT FRIGGIN SAVE IT.
want to know why? ill leave you to think about that.....................
Hey Good Job
I love your take on that. I know people who are Save Energy FANATICS and when you leave a light on accidentally or turn the heater on over 70 degrees, they FREAK OUT.
I would've loved if this was longer. The animation was well drawn.
The use of sound was pretty good, but I would lower the levels a little next time; it sounded very "placed."
But still, this is an excellent First Flash.
Its your first flash. Mine was waaaay worse (I didn't submit it into newgrounds). Definitely you've got some talent.
So for the criticism:
= Use of Sound - 4.5 / 5 (Some sound needed for the "?" mark
and the light bulb appearing)
= Animation Quality - 4.5 / 5 ( Well it wasn't much to animate but you did great )
= Comedic Effect - 5 / 5
= Overall Appeal - 4.5 / 5
A good score for a first flash.
For your very first flash
It is very good, it blows those stupid "maze" games away! Keep up the good work, aside from being short - It was good :)
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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