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This is my third movie subbmission to Newgrounds. It's still quite short, but if you like funny endings and stickmen to acrobatics, you'll probably like this.
this is BRILLIANT I love everyting!!!!!!!!!! Their is ABSOLUTLY no way you could improve it.
i like it
that was kinda funny and overall i liked it you get a 9 cause you guy was little and for the shortness
its not too bad.
im sure with time and practice you will develop your skills... but that was so random it was funny XD
pretty good, but a few suggestions.
one, experiment with your sounds a bit more. Your footstep sound was iffy, and sounded just like a couple other sounds you had in there. It didn't really sound like footsteps anyhow.
second, the stick was a little small, so it was slightly hard to tell what he/she was doing. But not bad. The irony at the end, though simple, wasn't lost on me :P
And nice job with the morphing credits thing.
overall, nice, but can be improved on. I'll give you a 3/5, 6/10.
Make the stick figures bigger.
And don't use those footsteps anymore :S
A short film about a park bench
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