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Really Nice Poem
I would like to thank you for using our song. The poem was well written and I enjoyed going through that interactive experience. I wish there was more. Good Job!
Props for interactivity
However, this a lack of animations. I understand your main intention was the poem but fixing up some of the animations wouldn't hurt. Good job on the poem.
if you understand the main intention was the poem, then why do the animations bother you.
more importantly how can the animations bother you when there aren't any other than the text appearing, which is done exactly the way its supposed to look.
Well its kinda depressing, but interesting.
I like it, so I send this link to a friend, who is a teacher aide for English Literature, also love it.
Interesting poem, keep improving, and I thank you for because you also found a interesting song That I would like.
Creative and a cool concept. I did manage to break the game once, after making the first big drop I was holding left/up and I fell through the ground. Didn't get a game over either.
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