I litterally only just started animating for the first time yesterday afternoon... and these are little things I've done in the last 24 hours. I'm looking for advice to improve on my animation, so if you can spare the "this is newbie crap" comments and just tell me what I can do to improve... I'd appreciate it.
Thanks for watching, and sorry for the lack of a preloader (Like I said... I'm new to this).
This was notbad
Well this was notbad it was entertaining and some of the fights were pretty good , I wouldn't mind seeing some more "SPECIAL EFFECTS" with some better blood shots and what not, but other then that it was a decent flash you have here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Notbad here but more effects all around would be a plus.
~X~
wondering
if there was more...
I think it could have been GREAT!!! _tony tiger once said. lol.
But I liked the smoothness, and it seemed to add different elements in each one.
I think with time you have some extremely cool flash toons.
:D
Great
Pretty good, here's some tips:
+ Increase Framerate
+ Muzzle Flash
+ Bullet tracers should be white or non existent
+ Make sure the bullets look they come from the gun
+ Draw the blood while zoomed in to at least 800% to make it look seksy
+ Work on an overall color scheme, with madness you'll probably want darker, more saturated colors
It looks like you took your time on this, which is great. The more time spent the better it becomes!
Thanks for the advice. I'll do my best to do the best :)
Good
Good effort for a begginer i dont even know how to make flash movies and i still like this and im not the jealous type
Thanks :)
This is my third attempt at even trying to use Flash... I finally worked out how to make another frame (The last time I went near Flash, I couldn't work out how to make a new frame... kinda stupid really).
it was fine
it wasnt the best. ya know make it a bit faster. But it was good.