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Feb 4, 2009 | 6:22 PM EST

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I litterally only just started animating for the first time yesterday afternoon... and these are little things I've done in the last 24 hours. I'm looking for advice to improve on my animation, so if you can spare the "this is newbie crap" comments and just tell me what I can do to improve... I'd appreciate it.
Thanks for watching, and sorry for the lack of a preloader (Like I said... I'm new to this).



Rated 4 / 5 stars


if there was more...
I think it could have been GREAT!!! _tony tiger once said. lol.
But I liked the smoothness, and it seemed to add different elements in each one.
I think with time you have some extremely cool flash toons.


Rated 4 / 5 stars


Pretty good, here's some tips:
+ Increase Framerate
+ Muzzle Flash
+ Bullet tracers should be white or non existent
+ Make sure the bullets look they come from the gun
+ Draw the blood while zoomed in to at least 800% to make it look seksy
+ Work on an overall color scheme, with madness you'll probably want darker, more saturated colors

It looks like you took your time on this, which is great. The more time spent the better it becomes!

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bonecollecta responds:

Thanks for the advice. I'll do my best to do the best :)


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Good effort for a begginer i dont even know how to make flash movies and i still like this and im not the jealous type

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bonecollecta responds:

Thanks :)
This is my third attempt at even trying to use Flash... I finally worked out how to make another frame (The last time I went near Flash, I couldn't work out how to make a new frame... kinda stupid really).


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

it was fine

it wasnt the best. ya know make it a bit faster. But it was good.

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Rated 1 / 5 stars


First off dont submit 3 parts of an unfinished flash. Work on it for days and weeks and then submit it.

Secondly don't do madness. It's been done 1,000000 times. Think of something original.

I mean it moved smoothly but there was no story, concept, or point to it. It was just random clips of madness deaths. Your anxious, but flash takes a while.

bonecollecta responds:

First off, this is NOT three parts of an unfinished project. This is three seperate things, mostly tests... seeing what I can do when I put my mind to it.

Secondly: Madness is cool. It may have been done 1,000000000 times, but who cares? It's something to learn with. Maybe in the future I will gain skills to draw my OWN flash cartoon, or maybe involve animation with my films.

Lastly: Thankyou for atleast taking the time to watch it :) Thanks for commenting and voting.